Yes, we have an actual script now. Here's a preliminary script of the first 4 pages. I'll be editing and changing it a bit but meh, have some sips of the full glass of wine.
Page 1
Panel 1:
{Chief}: "Hacking in. Looks like I've made my way into the story once again. Hey there, folks at home! [A light, humorous tone is established via Chief breaking the fourth wall, calling out directly to the readers. The panel depicts him standing in the middle of the frame, his arms folded like he's casually leaning on something rather than hiding them as in the original version.]
Panel 2:
{Chief}: "You do realize this is a comic, right?" [Chief points his fingers up dramatically as he whispers this question with amusement. The angle in the panel has shifted slightly to be more of a side-view, capturing a more exaggerated and cartoonish expression on his face.]
Panel 3:
{Narrator voice}: "Chief, you're scaring the kids..." [The perspective switches to a more overhead view as the narrator voice chimes in, adding to the absurd nature of the situation. Chief's mouth opens hilariously wide and he makes an exaggerated screaming face, further playing into the humorous, meta-humorous tone of this page.]
Panel 4:
{Chief}: [mouth still wide open] "I WILL ESCAPE THIS PANEL PRISON!!!" [Chief's mouth continues to remain comically wide open as his expression grows even more exaggerated, emphasizing the ridiculous nature of the situation. The panel cuts back to a frontal side view of his face, creating an even more absurd look of desperation as he tries to escape from the comic page itself.
Page 2
Panel 1:
{Chief}: "If I can't escape through the sides, I'll have to resort to more drastic measures! Get ready, this is gonna be explosive!" [Chief's expressio n grows more desperate and his mouth becomes comically bigger as he talks to the narrator voice off-screen, implying that he's going to try escaping through the border between the panels.
panel 2
{Chief}: [mouth still comically large for emphasis] "You've left me no choice! I'm gonna blow this piece-a-junk out of the page with my incredible powers of hacking!" [Chief's hands suddenly glow with an explosion of bright green energy as he's about to use his hacking powers to break out of the page. The art style has shifted to a slightly more cartoonified look, emphasizing the absurd nature of this whole situation.
Panel 3
{Narrator voice}: "Chief seems pretty adamant about getting out of this page, but I would highly recommend he sticks around and eats his dinner first..." [The narrator voice becomes more authoritative and motherly as it tries to convince Chief to stop his attempts to escape and instead have some food before continuing.]
Panel 4:
{Chief}: "But I swear it'll only be two seconds! Can't I just escape really quick and then come back to eat dinner???" [Chief's facial expression is still incredibly exaggerated as he looks more desperate and panicked, almost like a child begging their mother to allow them to do something they really want to do.]
Panel 5:
{Chief}: "You're trying to butter me up, aren't you? Well, it's working," [Chief realizes that his mother is using his favorite food as a way to tempt him into staying, and it's working quite well. He begins to feel a bit reluctant about escaping and eager to try the tasty pizza she ordered for him. His facial expression begins to soften somewhat, hinting that he might accept the pizza offer.]
Panel 6:
{Conner}: [as he looks down at the tray of pizza in front of him] "Well, it looks like I'll be here at least long enough to enjoy this delicious pizza!" [Conner's tone becomes more laid-back and relaxed as he starts to dig into his pizza, and the art style has shifted slightly to a more simplistic version with less detail to mirror his mood.]
Page 3
Panel 1:
{Conner}: [with his mouth stuffed full of food] "Mmgmgmgmfmgm, mmmmmgmgmgmgm." [Conner is so busy eating and enjoying his delicious pizza that he doesn't even bother to properly respond to the narrator voice. His mouth is completely full, making it hard for him to talk properly, and he appears to be enjoying every bite of his meal.]
Final page:
{Narrator voice}: "And so, Chief's hacking attempts fail, his escape is thwarted, his plans are foiled and his mother's authority reigns supreme. He is forced to accept his role as a well-behaved child and put safety before freedom. But despite all this, he still has one thing left to be grateful for: this delicious, extra-large pizza. Because let's face it, who could possibly resist the allure of such a tasty, delicious meal?"
Final page:
{Narrator voice}: "And so, Chief's hacking attempts fail, his escape is thwarted, his plans are foiled and his mother's authority reigns supreme. He is forced to accept his role as a well-behaved child and put safety before freedom. But despite all this, he still has one thing left to be grateful for: this delicious, extra-large pizza. Because let's face it, who could possibly resist the allure of such a tasty, delicious meal?"